Novel Thursday: The Other Side of the Horizon 1

In a world of steamships and Progress, no one who sails due south across the Wild Sea ever returns.
No one knows why.
Dale Mortensen intends to solve the mystery. With the help of an old sailor and a reformed playboy searching for his missing sweetheart, he locates a captain and crew ambitious—not to mention crazy—enough to undertake the journey across the Wild Sea.
The
Infinity and her crew sail south, but the truth of what really lies on the other side of the horizon is more amazing—and terrifying—than anything they can imagine.
It’s the adventure of a lifetime—and it may just get Dale and his friends killed.

Find out how this Young Adult steampunk adventure unfolds chapter-by-chapter every Thursday! Or if you want to read it at your own pace, buy the ebook for $7.99 from AmazonAppleBarnes & NobleKoboSmashwords or Sony, or in trade paperback from Amazon, Barnes & Noble, or Book Depository.

THE OTHER SIDE OF THE HORIZON

E. R. PASKEY

CHAPTER ONE

THE HOSPITAL WAS CROWDED AND NOISY. SOBS and moans from the injured combined with the wails of families mourning lost loved ones to create a din loud enough to make a deaf man’s head hurt. The survivors of Port Ruby were packed into the hospital like tinned fish.

Eight year-old Dale Mortensen huddled on a blanket on the far side of the room, nursing a broken arm in a cast. He sported a large scrape on one cheek— where his face had slammed into the trunk of the tree he’d been clinging to for dear life—and his brown hair flopped limply into his hazel eyes. He had not spoken a word to anyone in five days. Not even ‘please’ and ‘thank you’, which would surely have disappointed his mother.

Had she been alive to be disappointed, that is.

Overworked nurses tiptoed around the subject whenever they tried to talk to him, or rather, talked over him, but Dale was not stupid. He knew his mother and father and little sister were all dead. Of course they were.

After all, the tsunami had eaten them.

Dale clenched his good hand into a fist, barely feeling his short nails bite into his palm. He had never seen a tsunami before, had never dreamed that his beloved sea could turn into a deadly mass of angry brown water rushing onto shore. He remembered that day—the worst in his short life—in flashes. Little bits of memories, disjointed moments in time. He remembered the terror on his mother’s pretty face, the fear behind his father’s hazel eyes. His baby sister’s mouth had opened in a scream, but the roar of dirty water swallowed every sound. His palms still itched at the remembrance of rough bark on his skin.

He survived because his father had the sense to flee their home along the docks when the ocean retreated, laying bare an expanse of dark sand littered with shells, debris, and dying fish. Their family made it to higher ground before the ocean attempted to swallow up the coast, but it was not nearly high enough. His father had hoisted him up into a tree, but there had not been enough time for the rest of them to climb to safety.

In Dale’s nightmares, he reached for his little sister and the mud-colored water carried them both away. The backs of his eyes burned; he swallowed thickly and willed himself not to cry.

To distract himself, he looked over at the two old fishermen occupying two blankets squeezed in between him and the wall. One had bandages wrapped around his head and his torso; the other sported a broken leg. They were always arguing about something; today was no exception.

“I’m telling ya, it came due north,” insisted the man with the broken leg, in hushed, angry tones.

“O’ course it did, Cyrus,” his friend with the bandages replied dully. “North is the only way it could have come.”

“It’s the Wild Sea, come to claim more souls.”

A chill ran down Dale’s spine.

“For Pete’s sake, Cyrus!” exploded the other man. “Listen to yourself! You’ll be lucky if somebody doesn’t shut you up in the asylum before this is over!”

“Don’t think it’s still standing.”

Bandages ground his teeth together and rolled over to face away the wall.

Thus deprived of his arguing companion, Cyrus turned over-bright eyes on the closest person to him…which happened to be Dale. “You’ve heard of the Legend, ain’t ya, boy?”

Dale nodded slowly. A lump formed in the back of his throat. His father had spun wondrous stories about the Legend of the Wild Sea—stories as amazing as they were terrifying.

“Well?” demanded Cyrus, apparently expecting more.

“Leave the boy alone,” growled Bandages, without moving.

“No one who sails due south on the Wild Sea ever comes back.” Dale’s voice, scratchy from disuse, sounded foreign to his own ears.

“Exactly.” Cyrus thumped his cot with the flat of one hand, which he regretted when it jolted his leg. He grimaced fiercely behind his bushy gray beard.

Dale was still too numb to feel the flicker of mingled fear and excitement he usually experienced when someone spoke of the Legend of the Wild Sea. He was saved from the old fisherman’s further ramblings by the approach of a harried nurse with dark, slanted eyes and fall of straight black hair tied back with a cord. Despite the general chaos surrounding them, Calli had been kind to him over the last few days.

“Dale?” She put a gentle hand on his shoulder and peered down into his face. “Your uncle is here for you.”

Dale remained glued to his cot, but he stared at her with wide hazel eyes. My uncle? His heart began to hammer in his chest.

Calli sighed at his obvious distress. Kneeling down in the tiny walkway between the end of his cot and the cot across from him, she wrapped an arm around his shoulders. “Dale, your uncle is here to take you home with him. You’re going to live with his family now.”

Dale shook his head, his mouth set in a stubborn line. He knew he had family outside of his parents, but he had never met them.

“Dale…” Calli gave him a mildly reproving look. “You can’t stay here.” She motioned to the crowded room with one hand. “Your arm is healing and now it’s time for you to go. There are other children who need this cot.”

“I want my mother,” said Dale, in a very small voice.

Calli’s eyes widened—she had never heard him speak before—and her arm tightened around him. “Everything will be just fine, Dale. Your uncle will take good care of you, I’m sure.”

Taking Dale’s good hand, she helped him off the cot. He came grudgingly; the thought of meeting this never-before-seen uncle made him slightly sick to his stomach. I don’t even know where he lives. His parents had not talked much of their families.

Calli led him through crowded halls filled with makeshift pallets into an equally crowded lobby, where a short man with blond hair and ruddy cheeks stood clasping a brown hat in his hands. He looked supremely uncomfortable. For a moment, Dale wanted to hide behind Calli’s skirts, though he knew he was much too old for such childish behavior.

“Mr. Salander?” Calli tugged Dale forward. “Here is your nephew, Dale Mortensen.”

A look of grief passed over the man’s face. “You look just like your father,” he said gruffly.

Dale thought he sounded less than pleased about this. He stared at his uncle, realizing with a little jolt that he was nearly tall enough to reach the man’s shoulder.

“I’m your mother’s brother,” continued his uncle, reaching out a hand to shake Dale’s. “You can call me Uncle Liev.”

Dale nodded slowly.

“Yes, sir,” prompted Uncle Liev, which earned him a stern look from Calli.

“Mr. Salander, up until five minutes ago, this boy has not said a word. Be gentle with him.”

A strange combination of expressions passed over Uncle Liev’s face before he settled on a curt nod. “Thank you, Nurse.” Looking down at Dale, his brows furrowed. “Do you, ah, have anything to bring with you?”

Dale solemnly shook his head. His clothes, toys, books, and everything else his family owned had been swept away with their little house.

“I see.” Uncle Liev scratched the back of his head. “That’s all right. Your Aunt Helena packed a few things for you, but…” he eyed Dale, “I suspect you’re too big for any of them. We’ll have to stop someplace.” He placed a hand on Dale’s good shoulder. “Come with me, lad. We’ve a bit of a journey ahead of us.”

He guided Dale out of the hospital and into the street. Port Ruby was a large city built on a swelling hill, and the northern side had not experienced quite as much damage. The back of Dale’s throat ached as he looked down toward the Wild Sea and took in the wreckage still clinging to the coast, buried in mud and slime and other assorted debris. Part of him had hoped his father’s boat had survived, but he saw now that the chances of that were nigh impossible.

“Here you go, lad.”

His uncle stood beside an old steam-powered automobile parked along the street. He settled Dale in the front passenger seat without a word and hurried around to the other side. As he slid behind the wheel, he motioned to Dale’s arm. “The nurse said you’ll be wearing that for a few weeks more.”

Dale’s eyes slid to his cast and stayed there.

Uncle Liev started the automobile and backed carefully out into the street. They drove in silence for a little while, until he finally cleared his throat. “I’m sorry about your parents and your sister, Dale. Your father and I never quite saw eye to eye on some things, but he was a good man and he loved your mother.” His voice thickened; he had to clear his throat again.

His words helped, but only a little. Dale leaned his head against the side of the door and stared out the window. Houses and shops passed by in a blur of multicolored brick and stone. Part of him wondered where they were going; the rest of him was too tired to care. After the constant noise of the hospital, the automobile’s quiet chugging was a welcome relief.

“You’re coming home to live with me and my family,” continued Uncle Liev quietly. “Your Aunt Helena and I have five children. My eldest boy is just a year younger than you.” He rattled off a list of names that washed over Dale without leaving much of an impression. “I think you’ll like it in Falconcrest, Dale. We have a large farm, plenty of room for a young lad like yourself to run about.”

Those words alone penetrated the haze surrounding Dale—and sent an icy wave of shock coursing through him. “Farm?” he croaked.

“Yes.” Uncle Liev perked up a little at this, pleased Dale had finally spoken. “Over two hundred acres,” he said proudly. “Fields, trees, a little orchard, animals…your aunt and I have a bit of everything.”

Dale’s fingers tightened on the edge of his seat and his hazel eyes widened in panic. He knew about farms. They provided most of the food sold in Port Ruby’s markets, but his father had always said they were far from the sea. That could not be a good thing.

He struggled to put his thoughts into words. “We’re not—I mean, you don’t have a boat? I won’t be helping you sail? I won’t see the Wild Sea again?” His voice rose on the last sentence, full of worry and fear.

Uncle Liev took his eyes off the road long enough to look over at him. His brown eyes were serious. “No, lad. I don’t expect you’ll be seeing the sea any time soon. I don’t have a sailboat, y’see. We make our living from the land.” His face softened a little. “It’s not as bad as you think. There’s a lake not too far from us, and we’ve got a creek full of fish.” He paused. “And maybe, when you’re older, you can come back here to visit.”

None of it helped. Feeling sick, Dale wrapped his good arm around his middle and shut his eyes. Not for the first time in the last few days, he wished fiercely that he could have his parents and his baby sister back. He wanted their house back, and his father’s boat.

The last thing he wanted was to go to a farm where he would never see the Wild Sea again.

Next Chapter

Find out how this YA steampunk adventure unfolds chapter-by-chapter every Thursday! Or if you want to keep reading right now, buy the ebook for $7.99 from AmazonAppleBarnes & NobleKoboSmashwords or Sony, or in trade paperback from Amazon, Barnes & Noble, or Book Depository.

 Copyright © 2013 E. R. Paskey

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Novel Serialization

TOSOTH_websiteI’m very excited to announce that beginning Thursday, February 20, I will be serializing The Other Side of the Horizon here on my blog.

Yep, you read that correctly. I intend to put the entire book up to read for free. Come back every Thursday to read a new chapter!

It’ll take about a year to get through the entire book. (Of course, if you’re anxious to find out what happens before then, you can always buy it! *grin*)

I’ve been thinking about this for the last few months and finally decided to take the plunge. I love TOSOTH, and I want to share it with y’all. Plus, I’ve read serialized books before and I really enjoy having a new installment to look forward to every week. Hopefully y’all will enjoy it too.

In other news, the view outside my window is still a winter wonderland. It makes me think about The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe…and now I want hot chocolate and Turkish Delight. (Although, having looked Turkish Delight up, I’m not sure I’d enjoy it as much as Edmund did.)

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Book Updates

I haveDream_Soul_Awakens_Imagination some great news!

…no, spring isn’t here yet. I know, I know, I’m disappointed too. I’m ready for sunshine and warm weather and our front porch.

But! Snow, ice, and bitter cold aside, the end of January was really productive—I’ve finished both the rough draft of Treason’s Edge and the first round of Lady Ink’s edits!

That’s a good thing, because so far I’ve spent February involved in pre-spring Spring Cleaning. (Otherwise known as the great Winter 2014 Can’t-Stand-The-Looming-Cobwebs-And-Giant-Lurking-Dust-Bunnies-Anymore Cleaning Adventure.) So happy I finished before we dug out the cleaning supplies. 😛

Treason’s Edge clocked in at just under 183,000 words, which makes it the longest book I’ve written to date. It’s crazy; I had no intentions of letting it get that long, but the story just kept going. I will be making cuts in the editing process, however, so that number will decrease. But still…my characters had a lot going on in this book. *shakes head*

Unexpected length aside, and despite the fact that the story and my idea of the story wrestled with each other from the start, I’m pleased with how it turned out. Without giving too much away, I can tell you the book ends with a bit of a bang. *grin*

Editing Treason’s Edge will commence as soon as I’ve sent Lady Ink off to my first readers. I’m looking forward to finishing it so I can start writing Book 4. That’s going to be fun.

Speaking of Lady Ink, I’m hoping to send it off to my first readers in the next couple of weeks. As I think I mentioned, the sequel is already clamoring for attention,  but I don’t want to start writing it until I’ve got everything nailed down in the first book. *grin* There are a few areas I need to flesh out a bit more.

With TE done, I’ve turned my drafting attention back to my 2013 NaNoWriMo project (which technically I began back in May, when a particular scene popped into my head and refused to leave me alone until I wrote it down). I think I’m about 2/3 of the way through the rough draft.

It’s a sci-fi novel with a developing dash of romance. (My two main protagonists are a stranded female pirate with a prosthetic hand and a space captain who join forces after they’re both double-crossed by the same man. It’s been interesting.)

At the moment, I’ve gotten everyone into a terrible jam and I’m not entirely sure how I’m going to get them out of it. It’s terrifying and exhilarating all rolled into one. *grin* No title yet, but I’ll let you know as soon as I come up with one.

Stay tuned…I have a big announcement coming later this week.

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And We’re Off…

It’s a little late, but Happy New Year. I hope 2014 is off to a good start for y’all. It’s certainly been better for my family than the end of 2013. (Even with all the snow and extreme cold we’ve had the last few weeks.)

My dad lost his sister Christmas Day. It was pretty sudden, but we had enough warning to pack everybody up and make the twelve-hour drive to be with her before she died. She’s out of pain and with Jesus now, for which I am most grateful, but it was a rough way to end the year. I loved my aunt dearly and I’m going to miss her. It’s still strange to think she’s gone.

Needless to say, the grand plans I had for December got derailed and put on hold. I know some people react to shock and grief by throwing themselves into work, but my mind just went blank for while. On the plus side, I’ve been able to catch up on a bit of my reading.

At any rate, Treason’s Edge is now over 175,000 words (this book has turned into a monster, I swear), but I’ve finally reached the climax, so it won’t be long now until the rough draft is finished. I expect to cut quite a bit. *wry smile*

Also, I’m nearly through Lady Ink’s first round of edits…which of course has spawned a number of plot details and possibilities for the sequel. That’s just as well, considering the end of the story held me hostage last year until I promised I’d turn it into a duology.

I have an announcement to make in the next week or two, but I’m still hammering out a few of the details.

Until then, hope y’all stay warm. 🙂

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‘The Guardians’ Update

For 08those of you in the US, Happy Thanksgiving! Hope y’all have a wonderful day with family and friends. For those of you outside the US, have a great weekend. 🙂

I have some good news and some interesting news.

Good news? I finally have a title for the third book in The Guardians series. It’ll be called Treason’s Edge.

It was one of two possibilities I’ve been wrestling with for a few months now, but I think it does a better job of encapsulating the essence of Book 3.

Now for the interesting news…it’s going to take me a little longer than anticipated to finish Treason’s Edge. I crossed the 150,000 word mark on Tuesday, and the story needs a good 5-8 chapters yet to reach the end. I confess, that kinda caught me by surprise.

That said, word/chapter count will probably decrease in the second draft as I go back through and clean up sections where my characters are just spinning their wheels. (Sometimes the only way to make it through sticky, writer’s-block-inducing sections is to write the next sentence, and the sentence after that, and the sentence after that, until something finally breaks loose.)

I’d like to have the rough draft finished by the end of the year and the finished book hopefully out by March 2014, but we’ll see.

Part of my problem is the fact that I had a lot of preconceived notions going into this book. I’ve been looking forward to writing TE for at least five years—and I had a number of scenes and ideas for scenes that I thought would make it into the story. Imagine my surprise when the story balked and refused to progress until I let go of those ideas and proceeded off along the completely different course my characters were merrily charting without me!

It was a bit of a shock. 😛

The very cool result, however, is that TE has taken a number of twists and turns that are far better than anything I’d dreamed up over the last few years. I think y’all are going to enjoy this next installment. I know I’ve enjoyed watching it unfold as I write…even if it’s led to a few moments where I’ve seriously contemplated pulling out all my hair.

…which inevitably leads to moments where I’m staring at a wall instead of my computer screen and one of my brothers walks in and intones in a very deep voice, “Ah, the writer at work.”

A pen or two may be thrown at that point… but I’m not admitting to anything. 🙂

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Release News: ‘The Other Side of the Horizon’!

I am absoluTOSOTH_websitetely delighted to announce that The Other Side of the Horizon has been published! It’s now available at Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Kobo, and Smashwords, and is in the process of rolling out everywhere else.

The print edition will be available from Amazon and Barnes & Noble in a couple of weeks.

Considering that The Other Side of the Horizon started life as my very first NaNoWriMo project back in 2011, it’s fitting that it’s also published in November. *grin*

Here’s the cover copy:

 

In a world of steamships and Progress, no one who sails due south across the Wild Sea ever returns.

No one knows why.

Dale Mortensen intends to solve the mystery. With the help of an old sailor and a reformed playboy searching for his missing sweetheart, he locates a captain and crew ambitious—not to mention crazy—enough to undertake the journey across the Wild Sea.

The ‘Infinity’ and her crew sail south, but the truth of what really lies on the other side of the horizon is more amazing—and terrifying—than anything they can imagine.

It’s the adventure of a lifetime—and it may just get Dale and his friends killed.

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